A good effort...
One problem, a huge problem. Stream your music. Don't put the whole song in there, or you get these huge movie files that 56k modem users don't have the patience to download. It sounds real cool, but it's too large and it's too long for such a short clip of fighting.
Second, put in the light saber sounds.
Third have the Jedi use their light sabers instead of flipping around. Give the arms their own layers or something and go with it.
Lastly, give these guys a reason to fight. Pointless fighting movies are no fun to watch. For example, make one of the sabers blue and the other red. Classic Jedi vs. Sith scenario.
Keep working on it, you show promise, my young Padawan. (:P